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Review:patronus_charm says:
I'm spreading the love for the valentines day review-a-thon, and what's not a better story to review for it than a Jilly one!

Aw poor James so nervous about going to the prefect's meeting, and I can imagine why he wouldn't want Sirius around, as he would just wouldn't stop annoying James for becoming head boy!

I loved how you portrayed Lily, it was so funny to see her anger at James when she thought that he had stolen the badge. It was nice to see that Lily cared about Remus's feelings to about not getting the badge. And the her relisation that James had grown up and become a 'man', as I always thought that him becoming head boy, must have been a big swinging factor in her starting to like him!

A great one-shot, and I felt it portrayed their relationship very realistically! Well done, Kiana :)

Author's Response: Your review just put a big smile on my face! I know this is very short but I like it because it's a moment of something, it stands alone and you don't need OCs or backstories. They're a boy and a girl in a train compartment!

Thank you for choosing my story to review!


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