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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

Hey, there, its Gabbie with your requested review and let me just say that I love this story. Its actually very witty and, though awkward, more realistic than some other fanfics that I've read regarding the "new girl" syndrome. I think Charlie's narrative really sums up how I would feel, as I have been the new girl many, many times in school. All of her anxities were both funny and understandable while trying not only to stay out of Rebecca's way but also, oddly, trying to fit in. I think there's more going on with Victoria, I've got this really fishy feeling and not because I just finished eating salmon patties. There's something dark going on and the added addition of Aine and the two ducklings (Loved that one of the girl's name was Lavender Patil! I thought I was the only one who did that!) only adds to the mystery. :3
And what an awkward party. Charlie's POV is sooo funny and I really loved seeing through her eyes and how lonely she was. Though he didn't do it on purpose Albus sort of made her feel even worse after he left, I could really picture that scene in my head. Charlie standing by the Black Lake by herself. :(
Albus seems like a sweetie but his reaction to Victoria being gone has got me wondering. I wonder what's up with that? Hm.curious, curious things.
Anyway, this is really good! Really, really good. I love your characters and the plot, which I hope will continue to be just as fantastic!
Keep up the good work!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks for another awesome review! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and that you think it's realistic. I'm trying my best to stay away from cliche stereotypes, but I've a feeling a few might have slipped in there at some point.

I'm really glad you like Charlie's POV-it's a lot of fun to write and it's awesome that you like the other characters too!

Courtney:)


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