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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ooh second chapter, when you sent me the link, I didn't realise it was to this!

I did find Ruby's rant at Al a little unexpected, as in the previous chapter there hadn't really been any underlying issues, so this came as a bit of a surprise! I guess my reaction seemed similar to Al's though!

I liked the Greek mythology line though, and it seemed very fitting ;D

You captured a scary pregnant exactly how I imagined her to be though, as her emotions changed so dramatically you couldn't help but feel sorry for poor old Al, who's just so sweet!

The chapter lengths are quite short, which is good as it means much quicker updates, however it does mean that you don't get so involved in the story, as it ends rather quickly!

Other than that I thought it was a great chapter, and I'll be looking out for more, Kiana !

Author's Response: hey Kiana!

Im glad you liked this =)

haha yupp gotta love Greek Myth :D

oo yah the story is supposed to be short which is why the updates are kinda short too haha

thanks for reviewing!

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