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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello there! Happy Valentine's Review A-Thon!

I have to admit I haven't read the first part of this story, I've never actually read a Victoire/Teddy before but this was heartbreakingly beautiful! I can't even begin to imagine what she must've been feeling when reading that letter, especially since it was addressed to her sister! That's the one thing one could never get passed, although in my opinion you should never get passed somebody cheating on you. If they felt the need to cheat then something's obviously broken in that relationship and you should move on.

What I liked best about this is the fact that Vic didn't just melt into a happy little puddle when he said he wanted to marry her and not her sister. It's so easy for girls or even women to just fall into this vicious pattern where they believe it will be okay because they want it so bad only to end up hurt again. Victoire is a fine example of how a woman should hold herself even in the face of something like this and say "No, I deserve better than this!" and go out and seek it. The Veela in her is showing and that's a good thing, because as writers, we have the power to shape and control these characters and I think it's up to us to make them role-models. Or maybe I'm just looking too much into it!

All in all, lovely story, I greatly enjoyed it! Good luck with the Ship-Off voting!

Ral

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

You're very right about the cheating thing, you can never get past it. I am glad that you found this 'heartbreakingly beautiful' though, thanks!

I always wanted to portray Victoire as stronger than just forgiving him, and I am glad that you think that the Veela in her showed. And no, you're not looking too much into it, sometimes characters need to be role-models and I am glad Victoire came across as one!

I appreciate all your comments, thank you!


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