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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi m'dear!

You have an incredibly easy style to read. Not that it's simple, but you word things to have the most impact they can without hiding that impact in confusing sentence structures. This prologue felt like It was finished as soon as I started it. Annndd I just got a work email. Okay, this review is going to be terrible but I want to leave it before I respond to my work thing or else I'll continue to the next chapter without reviewing later.

The way you took us through what Fleur felt during the tasks was perfect. You gave her such a personality, without making her this shallow woman we see so often. She's intelligent. She's fierce. She came to win and she was upset she didn't. That's incredibly realistic. But she wasn't this brainless, mean thing.

I honestly couldn't think of a more perfect way to start us with this story. It got me so interested, and those last lines were amazing. Fleur loves Bill enough to literally die for him. She understands what the risks of being a Weasley are, and even her wedding day getting destroyed isn't enough to make her want to walk away from the man and life she chose.

She's such a complex character and I love that you're already showing that. So excited to continue!

♥ Jami

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