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Review:Soraa says:
I think this is great, I just finnished your last chapter with the feeling that things will never be over for these two and now you have proved my point, I really enjoyed the fact that you went into detail about the stake outs with Rose and Matt as not many people do and I like how she ended up in New York the city that never sleeps, sounds like a perfect place for someone trying to run away from their memories.

Also I'm so glad that Matt doesn't know everything about her becuase it is just going to make the experience of Scorp so much harder for him. Also I was wondering if Scorp might have a girlfriend now that Rose will have to try to not feel jealous of because it has been long enough for him to push his feelings down but now Rose is going to make them all arise.

I can't wait for the next chapter! with Rose and Scorp getting up close and personal during a stake out or something, after much protest on both parts I imagen.

Anyway, well done for the ideas behind the sequel they're great!
Sora

Author's Response: Funny thing about going into to detail about the stake outs, I so almost didn't do that, I originally just had Matt mentioning it in the kitchen, but I really wanted to show how far Rose was in her life and that she is tuff and a force to be reckoed with. I'm glad that you like New York, I just had to get them out of London, that is the first step for them to ever be together agian, lol.
Yeah that is something that is really going to get to Matt, until that day he had honestly assumed that he knew everything about Rose and he does feel a little unequel in the fact that she knows everything about him.
I'm not sure what to say for Scorpius' love life right now without revealing too much there is a story to it. I will say that at the current moment he doesn't have a girlfriend. Also speaking of feelings, I think that it is going to be more of the opposite, I think that Scorpius is going to be the one to make her feelings arise again.
I'm worrking on the next chapter now, it was finished until I had a better idea and decided to rewrite parts of it.
Thank you so much for the review. I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much.


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