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Review:Carson Nicole says:
I really love your story, and I think you are doing fantastic.
I wanted to point out one little error you have in chapter one. Luna is talking and says that Neville had never been able to see the Thestrals before, but in The Order Of The Phoenix we find out that he does see them. In my copy of the book, on page 445 in chapter 21 where Hagrid is teaching on Thestrals, he asks who can see them and Nevil raises his hand, plus we see him watching the flicking of one of the Thestral's tail. Also, in my copy of the book on page 449, Umbridge asks Neville who he saw die and says his grandad.
I really hope this helps! I don't mean to be to critical but I happen to be re-reading that book and I remembered reading that bit.

Author's Response: Thank you!
And no problem, I like critical-ness sometimes ;) I haven't read that book in over a year, so I guess I've missed some things!
I'll be sure to fix that, thank you!

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