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Review:batsoulini says:
Oh, Marta made a magical will? Clever... but why? I need to get back to the prequel and read thouroughly... If Benjamin enforced her to do so, that's not good, but if she had a plan then i'm up for it!

The Failure Card makes me wonder... What if the little bastard wins again? I won't stand this!

As for the chapter, a little uneventful with the exception of some sort of clues concerning her past... Overall it was balanced ;)
I really want to know more about that will and what is entailed with it!

Hope you update soon
Greetings from Greece
-Maria

P.S. To say the truth i prefered the banner of the prequel than this one... Sally-Ann wasn't supposed to be a replica of Marta? I was expecting a playful version of Emma Roberts...

Author's Response: Marta did indeed make a will and filed it with the Ministry on the Monday after Sally-Anne was conceived. I didn't go into detail about what was in it though. And I highly doubt the Perks will let Sally-Anne (and the readers) see the will or read any specifics, sadly. :(

The Failure Card- I'm sorry if I sound mean or cruel, but I enjoy knowing what that card represents in the future of this story. I'm sure you'll enjoy it too when the time comes! :D

After all the things that happened in the previous chapter, this one was indeed quite dull. And you're right, it was more about giving out clues (maybe a bit more than even you're aware of so far). The significance of what happens here won't be totally clear until near the end of the story.

Thank you for another review! I already have the plans for Chapter 5 written out. Now it's just a matter of me getting to my computer to turn my outline into an actual story. :)

I have to agree with you about the banner for this story. Sally-Anne is indeed supposed to look like Marta, but the reason why I didn't use Emma Roberts again was that I didn't want it to look like this story was a prequel to Friend. Also, there's a three year age difference between the two girls. I figured that there would be enough time for 'Selena' to mature to look like 'Emma'. So I'm sorry if I disappointed you with my character choice. :(


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