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Review:Courtney says:
I'm sorry but Lily is stupid for going back to James. Just because Courtney kissed him doesn't mean he had to reciprocate and from the your description of the first kiss she saw, he was clearly kissing Courtney back. It would have been easy to push her away and prevent her from kissing him, especially after it happened the first time and he knew that was what she would try to do. For it to happen once and him to push her away would be one thing, but for them to kiss 3 or 4 times and him to never see it coming and stop it is pretty unbelievable. So James is totally in the wrong and I think Lily was right not to trust him and she let him off way too easily. I hope that James actually stays loyal to her no matter how many girls come on to him.

Author's Response: I get exactly what you mean. It's all part of Courtney and Sirius's plan, mind tricks and seduction. I mean, seriously, James is a typical boy - he might love Lily but Courtney is basically the tart and you might find boys in real life all like "I love my girlfriend!" but along comes the Seduction Mistress and they're all over them. Just you wait until the next chapter. Chapter 11 is all about the Halloween ball and Phase 2 comes into play. It should be up pretty soon and I hope you like it when it gets validated :)

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