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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello, Laurenzo7321 here from the forums :)

Oooh, I really enjoyed this one shot. It was a different take on both the joker Fred, who takes after his dad and uncle, that we usually see and the song you got. I really enjoyed it!

The imagery was great in this and I enjoyed reading it through Fred's POV. Alex really got under his skin and the way you showed that and built it up in the club was really good!

I like that by leaving him she brought him down a peg or two, gave him a taste of his own medicine so to speak. It made him realise what he lost and ultimately made him fall in love with her. The last line was perfect!

Great job and I will PM you soon with the results!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey Lauren!

Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! I enjoyed writing it :) It is a different side to him, I really couldn't of another way to express him ;P

Thank you so much. I was really worried that I hadn't wrote enough to make it descriptive, so for you to say that the imagery was great really makes my day :)

Exactly!! Spot on :) You never know how much you love something until it's gone, so to speak.

Thank you again for such a great challenge, I really really loved doing it :) Looking forward to finding out!!

Thanks for such a amazing review and challenge!!

- Abhi

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