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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello again :)

Okay, I thought this was another good chapter to your story. I enjoyed the change in POV, Sapphire certainly is a character! You've made her very different from her sister which is really good to see.

I wasn't quite sure what the thing she had with Fred was? Is it just a bit of a hate match between them? You've certainly taken a different route with Fred - he's usually much more of a joker like his dad and uncle! It was definitely interesting and makes you want to read more.

That grim-reapers a bit nasty! 2 years to have a kid with someone you don't even like. I can't even imagine that.

You have a few sentences that don't quite make sense - it might be worth re-reading and having a look or maybe getting a beta?

Another good chapter, well done.

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey! thank you for doing this!

I am glad you liked it!

I'll go check up on those right now! Thanks for mentioning those!! the Grim Reaper is just evil what can I say haha

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