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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey Its Mya! Here for you requested review =)

It's cool to see Oc's who aren't exactly with the Wotters and all. I loved how you put Rox in there since she is barely ever mentioned.

The names! Wow. That was intense really. I had a bit of trouble keeping with them all so maybe that is a turn off for people? Since it makes reading a lot harder. Maybe you could give more identifiers of the characters so we become more comfortable with them?

The divorce thing was really interesting since I have never seen that happening before. I wonder how that will work out really. It's pretty unique too so great job!

You said you weren't sure of pairings and I was thinking maybe that would really help if you could figure that out. you didn't necessarily need pairings, you could just have none but pairings is something ppl look for when reading fanfic (sometimes) esp. since its Young Adult.

Besides that, great job! Keep up the great work =) I really love the idea!

Mya :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Yes, I've been told about the first chapter being difficult to follow, and I'm planning to include some kind of family tree, along with deeoer insight into each persona.

Did I ever say that? I can't remember anything about it (God, I'm worse than I thought), because for me pairings have always been clear. Hmmm...

Thank you for your review :)

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