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Review:fauxthefox says:
Wow, this is heavy. I've rarely read a story here with so much meaning and characterization and memory and just general awesomeness packed into such a small space.

I love your stream-of-consciousness narrative because it isn't lodged too deep in the characters' heads - there are still descriptions and concrete images. It wasn't too difficult to read, and I LOOOVE the paragraph-long-run-on sentence toward the end! It's glorious! It makes sense for it not to be "properly" punctuated because it's all taking place in Remus' head, a chain of memories.

I love the style, and I love the idea. Cheers! :)

Author's Response: Well, that's always a good start to a review. :D

I love well-done stream-of-consciousness, so I'm very glad that you think mine's decent, especially that giant sentence.

Thank you so much for your review!

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