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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey! Mya here for the swap! Sorry for the delayyy! Loads of homework and all

This is definitely one of the coolest narration styles I've ever seen here!! Seriously it was amazing.

My favorite part was when the sentences connected but from the different POVs. It was so unique! You really did an amazing job here.

I really loved the whole story. I do think we could maybe get a bit more feel for the characters if you mentioned small things that could show us their personality traits but really it was amazing. This is me trying, and failing, to find faults haha.

Great work Maggie and thanks for the swap!!

Author's Response: Hi Mya! Thank you so much for coming by!

Ahh thank you! I'm so happy to hear that you like the narration. I was sort of playing around with having their thoughts flow together and complete each other, and this was the best way I knew to do it. So glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the characterization suggestion. I'm always looking for ways to improve on that, so it's much appreciated.

Thank you again for the awesome review! We should definitely swap again sometime :)


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