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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
Hello, Akansha, dear! I'm here with a review for you.

To put it shortly: I'm interested. You've hinted at several little things that I am very excited to see play out. First of all, I'm excited to see Addison's friendship with Hugo. Hugo isn't a character that gets a lot of notice, so I'm excited to see how you interpret his character. I also can't wait to meet James. Now he is a character that does get a lot of attention and I'm very excited to see how you imagine him.

And, of course, there's Addison herself. My initial impression is that she's not very happy with life. I'm guessing this has something to do with the life-threatening injuries and subsequent lack of job that Harry brought up - somthing else I'm eager to hear more about.

Basically, you've caught my attention with this chapter and I'm quite excited to see where you go with this. Also, I think you did a good job with Harry. He wasn't featured a whole lot, so there's not much to judge by, but he didn't seem to be OOC or anything, so that's good. Trust me, the most nerve-wracking things for me is trying to write him or the other Weasley adults.

Lovely, lovely, lovely work. I can't wait to read your next update - whatever it may be!

-Laura

Author's Response: Hello Laura! Thanks for taking the time.

Originally, I'd planned that Hugo won't exactly be a major part of the story- his appearance was confined to the first two chapters. But lots of people are interested, so I may increase his part, do bits of, I dunno, cameo appearances. All I can say is, this is definitely not the last we'll see of Hugo.

James, hmm, he has been done so many times, but it never gets old, does it? As for my interpretation, well, you already know Addy's assumptions- a spoilt brat, so... ;)

Addison is my most ambitious character, in that I'm hoping to give her a life outside Hogwarts, so I'm equal parts nervous and exited. And no, she definitely isn't happy with where she is right now- sitting home all day doing nothing isn't her cup of tea.

The part with Harry took me the longest time, and there's yet more of him to come. *Cue wreaked nerves*

Thanks, yet again, for everything. Your insightful and sweet review completely made me forget about all those stupid haters.

Chocolated-coated almonds and raisins,
-Akansha.

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