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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey! Its Mya for your review! I am so sorry for the delay dear!!

Anyway here I go!!

This was beautifully written love! I really enjoyed the amounts of emotions you showed! Like holy cow! It was amazing!! Great job!

One thing I noticed, you said Ginny was having her 2nd son but then you went on to say that Molly wondered if she would see Rose, Lily and Victorie talking on the table. Well if Lily isn't born yet that wouldn't work lol. So maybe you could look at that again?

Besides that this was great! =) Amazing work!

You know where to find me if you want more reviews :D

Author's Response: Hi there! No trouble, and thanks for coming by.

I'm happy the emotion came through okay for you, and that you enjoyed the story overall. That's great to hear :)

I think you may have misunderstood the comment about the girls sitting at the kitchen table. The scene with the pregnant women was a memory; it wasn't really related to the next couple of lines. I merely meant that Molly was thinking about how the girls would gossip years from now at that table, like so many had done before them. I suppose I could see how that might have been unclear, though, so maybe I'll go back and take a look at it later. Thanks for the critique.

I really appreciate this kind review!

-Amanda


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