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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey Its Mya here =)

Since I already reviewed the other chapter before for the heck of it I will just review this one for the request you put in =)

I really did enjoy this though I would love to know a bit more about the siblings. The fathers is a great mystery place and I would love to know how you are going to play with that but I am glad you didn't beat around the bush with the whole telling parents thing.

I would also love to see more bout Frank but I do understand you need to build the plot.

Besides that this was a great start! I really do love it =)

Author's Response: Hey Mya,

Well hopefully it'll come as a surprise as who they are especially since two of them are related.

I didn't want Ally to drag out telling her parents because she's just gone 12 weeks even though she doesn't know it yet. And she know's that with he dad as headmaster that he would find out sooner or later.

Ahh Frankie, there will be more Frankie to come :)

Thanks for reviewing!!! and I'm glad you love it!!!

-Potterfan310
Soph xx


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