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Review:Siriusly89 says:
NO! I've been piped to the post!

Ah well! Still super excited about the new chappie!

People hate Lisa? Who could hate that sweetheart? I loved their girly time, very entertaining considiring Edie ate a SALAD! Dun dun dun! And then the way she spent her morning, pj's until noon! She is just the best! Makes me feel a lot better about myself, seeing as its ten past two in the afternoon and I'm still in my pyjama bottoms. . . . .whoops!

YES! SWEET SWEET REVENGE IS ON THE CARDS DEAR ROSE! Ha ha! I hope Edie gets to tell Blakeslee, but then I hope she doesn't, because Rose is such a manipulator, she will probably worm her way out of it, and then Edie will have no job! Gah!

She should really open up to Lisa about everything though. I understand she doesn't want to look pathetic in front of her seemingly perfect best friend, who basically leads a charmed life, but she needs someone to talk to! ASAP!

Another brilliant chappie! I wait in anticipation (I will regain my title :P)

Author's Response: I know! I was so shocked! haha, I think the chapter went up sometime reeeaaally early in the morning, so don't worry. It didn't count ;3

I don't think anyone really hated Lisa, but they just didn't believe she was realistic because her life was so perfect. And I based her off of my friend, who is the sweetest girl I've ever met; is gorgeous; danced professional ballet and traveled the world; is engaged to a guy she is crazy about; lives in an awesome house; has an adorable baby; etc etc etc. So I just wanted people to see that Lisa's very human and does things like eat an entire tub of ice cream when nobody's looking.

You are so on-point about Edie needing to tell somebody about being unemployed. I'm hoping readers will see exactly how little she's capable of opening up to people. She doesn't want to admit fault to anyone, so she refuses to talk about what happened with her job--even Oliver--even though her friends and family would be more than willing to help her out. She's too proud. It's definitely a character fault that will be playing a major part in later chapters!

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews. I always look forward to them. Can't wait for an update on your Oliver story! ;D

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