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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Well, this is definitely getting more interesting. So... she is Hermione, and there was a Drasina. And this "ministry guy" isn't a good one if he wants her unprotected. I'm very curious.

This is a really good story so far. Although I did notice some little things, like no punctuation where there should be. I don't know if you have a beta or not, but maybe you should think about getting one, just to look over it with a different set of eyes to catch the little things. Maybe just one to look over punctuation because,other than that, you have a really good plot going here and I wouldn't change anything of that. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Author's Response: Hello again!
Thank you so much for the review. I have finally realized I'm in this for the long haul. I have rough drafted the next three chapters. I should be updating a bit more regularly now.

I am looking into a beta. Grammar has never been my strong suit. like ever :( The next chapter should be a bit more interesting. Happy Reading ~ Lady


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