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Review:fauxthefox says:
Hi! This Faux from the forums with your requested review! I have a few comments to make:

PLOT/STYLE: I am mad into your writing style xD Seriously though, your prose is very clear and clever, and you've got some great descriptions woven in. Especially toward the beginning, some of your dialogue is a bit awkward/unnatural, but for the most part everything flows very well. The plot reads well, though I would've preferred a little more action.

CHARACTERS: I like them all so far, especially Oliver, who's very canon (just grown up). I guess there could have been a little more description of them in there, but as this is only your first chapter, you'll have plenty of time for that.

I love this kind of post-Hogwarts story, because it's about something other than Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Draco! Very fun and engaging!

Thanks for making a request - I had a lot of fun reading your story, so feel free to re-request in the future! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I;m glad you like it so far! I agree this chapter was a bit on the boring side, but in my opinion first chapters always are :P

I'm glad you liked the description, as this is my weak point and I usually forget to add enough in!

Thank you so much for such a nice review :D

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