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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Hi (again) Amanda!

I'm very excited to see this story develop. If I recall properly, you'd announced this on your About Me page, and I was quite impatient to read it. So, here I am!

I have the inexplicable feeling that I'm going to like this Cedric more than JK's: there's something about him that makes him appear more broken and accessible in your portrayal.

As for Cho, I'm waiting to see more of her to determine whether I like her or not (she irritated me a bit in the books).

Consider that you've earned yourself a follower on this story :)

Author's Response: Hi Val :) Thanks for stopping to leave a review.

Yes, I've been hyping this and my other new one (coming tomorrow) for quite a while. I'm just excited to have completed some new stuff to post while I slowly work on new chapters for my novels.

Yes, Cedric is injured, so he's going to have to depend on the hospital staff and others to help him more than he would probably like to. Hopefully there are still some recognizable elements of the Hogwarts hero and Quidditch player in there, though, that will come out as he begins his recovery.

I didn't like Cho much in the books either, but I felt like the idea of her romance with Cedric would fit this sort of old-world style. I think I've changed her a lot, so hopefully you end up liking her better. Her appearance is coming in chapter two.

Thanks so much for your review, once again! Hope to hear from you on the next chapter :)


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