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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey, its Gabbie here with your requested review and I'm sorry that I didn't immediately attack this, I've been annoyingly busy.And there are no cupcakes. :(
But anyway, this is pretty interesting and I really love Charlie. She's like this spunky, sarcastic monster that I found completely hilarious and oddly likeable. I think with you having her being homeschooled for most of her life really adds to her personality and why she acts the way she does. And her family is pretty odd too, I really enjoyed reading about her parents. The fact that she doesn't want to go to Hogwarts and intended to show it just makes me see that she's really stubborn. It was actually pretty funny imagining her pouting and frowning the way she was and once at Hogwarts, she was just so awkward. You don't say "Okey Dokey" to McGonagall! You cower in fear and pray she doesn't dock points! But how could she have known that? The way you've written this from her POV makes Hogwarts feel very fresh and new again and I really loved it.
But there's some mystery going on here and I must find out what it is, its killing me. From the way McGonagall was acting, this Victoria girl didn't just go missing, she had something a bit darker going on. I love a good mystery! And how awkward must it be for Charlie to have her old dorm and be confronted with her pictures? Eerie, I think and that ending! WHA?! See, now you've got me wanting you to re-request. Do IT.
I loved this. I think Charlie is a very unique OC and I really loved that you didn't make her a Mary Sue, that would get so boring. There were only a few grammar things but I thought your pacing and flow were great! :3
Thanks for the read!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the amazing review! It was like a bright spot on a day that has so far been spent nursing my awful sunburn!

I am so happy you like Charlie and her character-she is definitely a bit awkward, especially in that scene with McGonagall. I will definitely be re-requesting!

Thanks so much again!
Courtney:)


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