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Review:crookshanksfan says:
Wow! I started reading this story yesterday, and when I came back today you have updated like another 5 new chapters. Wow I'm impressed :)

And I love this story. I like the way you weave your plot, and how the unexpected moments pop up making my heart hum sweet songs :D

First of all, I love Ellie and Leo. They are so sweet children, I wanna adopt them hehe :D James is adorable, and playful, it almost makes me wanna adopt him too ;) Well written POV of a werewolf. Bravo!

But I wish there weren't any more than 2 POV changes per chapter or per the whole story. It got me confused. But it's a nice idea in one way, I get to know how every character thinks, but what I love the most is Ellie's and James' POVs. Though you aced the last one in Leo's POV. All in all, I love this story. Keep on updating :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh yeah, the queue yesterday night had a very short waiting period, so I uploaded as much as I could. That's really helpful, I can see how more than two could be confusing :) Thanks for letting me know so I can keep my readers from whiplash ;).

Thanks,
soapman333

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