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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Val, you are on FIYAAAHHH with your updating right now. I'm so excited to see another story on your author page!

Uh. What is going on. How are you getting even more amazing at writing? I was really impressed by your historical writing in Frozen Waters, but this goes so much more into minute detail--minute original detail about magic's role during WWII. I am so impressed! This is incredible!

At first I was worried about there being six characters introduced at once, but you seem to know them all, inside and out. I love the companionship between Johanna and Camille; Simon's devotion to his sisters; the way his mother would call for dinner across the courtyard.

This is so great. Really! I can't wait for some story graphics so I can see what everyone looks like! Of course you did a great job with the physical descriptions, particularly Xavier's and Astrid's. I just get really excited about CIs and such xD

Nice work, again!

Author's Response: That sums it up pretty well, yes.

I knew you'd worry about large casts, so the fact that you think it makes sense is the best thing you could tell me. I'll be going into more precise insights of characters though...

You have no idea how excited I am about story graphics too! They're slowly being made, and I'm really excited to get your opinion on them.

Thank you, again, for such an amazing review!

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