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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I thought that the characterisation of Ruby and Albus was great, and you managed to develop a really sweet relationship between the 2 despite the relatively small chapter, so that was a really good job. One thing I would like is perhaps some backstory as to where the relationship begun, as then we get a sense of them more.

I liked that you placed Al in the department of mysteries, as most people tend to make him an auror, and I always think that just because his dad was one, doesn't mean he has to be one to, so that was a good choice.

One CC I would suggest, is perhaps break up your paragraphs, as it can daunt a reader seeing such a big ones, it was ok here due to the short chapter, however if it was any longer it may have made the reader lose concentration:)

I think it was a good start though, and I'm a sucker for pregnancies stories, so I'll be keeping an eye out for updates, thanks for the great swap, Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hey Kiana! Nice to see you!! =)

Thank you! I am glad you liked it! Your review always means soo much ahha.

Ya I wanted to try something new lol but it took a while to find something good for him that wasn't an Auror.

Ohh! yah thank you! I'll keep that in mind now =) For the future!

Yay! Im glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting! I'll be getting to your story 2morrow! I'm gonna end up reviewing both stories cuz its a ScoRose story and i have been looking for one since soo long about them!

Mya=)

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