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Review:Courtney Dark says:

What an interesting concept you have here! The beginning of this chapter was very hooking-mainly because I feel you have a writing style that is very gripping, and very professional. I love that you managed to create a very smooth and even flow by using such great descriptions and details. However I'd just be careful that these descriptions aren't too over the top.

While I was reading it, I did think Devlin's character seemed like it was going to be a little too mature, but I completely understand what you mean in your author's note, and now I am curious to see how this extremely creative story is going to progress!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am fiddling with the idea of adding a year or two to Devlin.

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