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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I have to admit I was perplexed over who/what the story was centre around for the majority of the story. At first I thought it was the Potters due to the mention of the toy broomstick, and I knew Harry had one, then it clicked when you said Draco.

I do think it was really effective after reading it though, as it showed how similarly Harry and Draco's lives started off, but both being drastically changed, due to one of them losing their parents. It makes you wonder how similar Harry may have ended up to Draco, if James and Lily hadn't died!

I really liked how you showed that Lucius and Narcissa were in fact caring parents, as they're often portrayed to be the reverse, when I don't think that's true, so it was nice to see it written more realistically:)

Good job, Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hi m'dear! I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

I have to admit, I wrote it for the entire purpose of being tricky and making it sound like Harry until the end.

I agree that they were, at some point, probably very loving parents in their own way.

Thanks again &hears;


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