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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This chapter reminded me of just how much I love this story! You pot Edie into the awkwardest and weirdest and most horrible situations. And then just when things start going well for her...everything goes downhill!

Poor Edie, losing her job like that! I really felt for her in this chapter, especially the whole prospect of her being unemployed while her best friend has an amazing job. You have an excellent way of writing about the trials and tribulations of adulthood!

Your characterizations are awesome. Edie is such a real, believable character and so...human if that makes any sense at all. I love her witty little comments and I especially love the chemistry between her and Oliver. And this bit made me laugh: 'I’m sure his thought processes, which I imagine to be something like QuidditchQuidditchQuidditchFoodQuidditchSexQuidditchQuidditch, did not account for how this may be uncomfortable' because it just seemed so...Oliver Wood. And the comment was so...Edie.

Wow. I am so unhelpful!

Anyway, I can't wait for your next update, and I am certainly interested to find out how Edie and Oliver's next meeting is going to go. I'm guessing things won't go exactly to plan? They never seem to in Edie's life!

Awesome chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi, hi, hi!

The notion of everything being weird and horrible, and then only getting so much worse, is why I wrote the story in the first place xD

Losing your job is a very real (and very scary!) aspect of our world today. A lot of my friends IRL and on HPFF have been affected by it, and I wanted to comment on it and hopefully help people see how difficult it is. Not only has Edie been turned down from every journalism position she's applied for, but now she's lost her shoddy job too! What's a girl to do, eh?!

No! You have no idea how helpful you are being. I was SO nervous posting this chapter because I wasn't sure how people would respond to their chemistry... at the last minute I had a breakthrough in which Oliver finally started getting along with me and told me a little about himself xD So I feel much more comfortable writing him now.

I think it's pretty safe to say that for Edie, nothing will go as planned... ever. ;D Thanks so much for another lovely review.

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