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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Gah, I can't believe how close I'm getting to the end of what you've written so far! I really hope you write more quickly because this has been an awesome ride, reading and reviewing a new chapter almost every day!

Brienne is honestly such a great character-I can totally see why she was dominated for the Dobby's! She's so well rounded and you've developed her personality in a way that makes me believe she's actually real! I also like the fact that her behaviour has subtly changed since the last couple of chapters-she seems to have become slightly more reserved, more cautious, which is very fitting. I also really liked the line: 'Her weight rose, and he performed enlargement charms on her clothes so that they would fit' because it was a very...human touch. In loads of fanfictions and even published novels, we see super slim girls so it is definitely nice to read about someone a little more human. And I can totally relate to Brienne because I ALWAYS put on weight in the Christmas holidays!

I've really enjoyed reading about Douglas, and I hope we see him again in future chapters! You have managed to characterize him very well in the few chapters that we have known him, which is an awesome skill! I love the relationship between he and Brienne, love the fact that he is an awesome cook and love the fact that his behaviour has also changed since Stanley's visit-how protective and loving he is of his only daughter. But while I'm going to miss reading about him, I can't wait to get back into Hogwarts!

I really enjoyed reading the scene with Brienne and Paisley. I thought the insight into Paisley's muggleborn life was a nice detail to add-I had been looking forward to learning more about her, and the bit about Lee Jordan sending her chocolates was great! I can definitely imagine him doing something like that, and I am looking forward to seeing if his, er...relationship with Paisley goes any further!

I really liked the paragraph that began with: 'The conversation lifted Brienneís mood far higher than she could have expected.' It was a very nice break from all the dark and dangerous stuff-very teenagery, very light...and I think Brienne needs some of that stuff in her life at the moment! I already can't wait for the next chapter, and for Brienne to see George and Fred and Angelina once again!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! I can't say how much your reviews have massively cheered me up over the last weeks! I don't think anybody has ever been so consistantly happy with the story! I will update as soon as I can so you can keep reviewing!

Brienne is my pride and joy, and no matter how sad that is to say it's the truth xD I was so excited when she was nominated, it's just a shame she didn't win :)

I'm so glad you like my other characters too! Paisley and Dougles are both good people for Brienne to be around. Fred, George and Angelina are in the next chapter!

Thank you again for the lovely review!


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