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Review:patronus_charm says:
I saw that this was a Regulus story, and truth to be told, I've never read one before, as I much prefer Sirius out of the Black siblings. So I've kind of ignored poor old Regulus but here's my chance to find out more!

I liked the way you described him as sin, as I guess that's how most people view Sirius as, well sin for his womanising. So I liked how you drew parallels between him and his brother, as a lot of people tend to forget that they are in fact incredibly similar!

But then you show that though they may appear similar on the outside, they are very different on the inside, and I liked the way you showed the differences, as I thought that was a very effective and different idea, I've always thought Regulus was rather mysterious, so I was glad to see that included in the list. I'm guessing the ice is referred perhaps to an icy heart? It would be nice to see if you did another one-shot, and give the reason behind his coldness:)

I loved how you made Sirius ask her out, as it was an interesting twist, as most people would probably die if he asked them out, so for her to reject him, in favour of his brother was a very original idea!

I'm guessing as her surnames Patil, she may be related to the Patil twins?

Overall I thought it was a great story, especially as it fitted into 500 words, and that's an incredible feat, as it really captured my attention, I loved it, is all I can say really!

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