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Review:ines0803 says:
Best part of the chapter (in my opinion):
"He grabs onto his chest and falls down to the ground in a mock heart attack, "My heart! My heart hurts because of non-reciprocated love, and now, I have to die! OH!"
I look back at Charlotte, she shrugs, "Let's leave him." I agree with a nod.
"Oh, look! I've miraculously survived!" James shouts after us, getting up off the ground and running to catch up."
James will just do anything to get her atention :)

I liked this chapter. Is good to see that Ellie is finally making some friends. Why didn't she talk with Charlotte before? And why does Lily hate her so much?
I'd love to see more of this story! Keep posting, please!
Ines

Author's Response: Oh man, thanks, I love that part too ;)

I just added the next chapter to the queue, it really introduces Charlotte as a main character :) but she explains to Ellie that her friends were older than her and graduated the passing year.

Sorry, don't hate me, but Lily doesn't get explained for a little while, but she will be!

soapman333


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