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Review:megthechef43 says:
Dark,

Wow-o-wow. You out did yourself with this story. It was so raw and real and true. I understand these emotions. For the first time this year I lost some one who was truly special to me. It is hard. I know you lost family this year too. This story was great at showing recovery is possible.

I love that Rose was able to come back and cope with the lost of the love of her life. I can understand debilitating loss that she felt when the love her life was gone. I am glad in the end Rose found comfort and so did Blade (love that name for Blaise's son). Hopefully together they can be whole together.

Awww... I ABSOLUTLY LOVED your ending for Hermione and Draco! It was perfect with his worries about how she might react. I love when he started "wonder when Hermione would be ready to wear a new ring" LOVE!! The silent question and the silent answer. OMG I wanted to cry from the perfect sweetness!!

"knew that to love and lose… was still worth it." AMAZING. Need i say more? It was perfect that he came to realization.

I loved this story and the perfect ending. I still have questions but I understand my question need answers that weren't the aim of the story which makes the story complete within my head. But, so I don't leave you wondering, I wonder how Rose felt about her mom and the love of her life's dad being together and getting married. I would also love to know how things turn out with Rose and Blade. I know they have a long road in front of them because you said it "strangely felt both so wrong and so right all at once." Could Blade stay with his best friend's girl? Would he mentally battle with the fact that she loved his best friend with the fact that Scorpius would have want them to both be happy? Would Rose have the same issue?

Again it wasn't the point of the story to delve into the life of Rose but I can't help but wonder.

Anyway, perfection as always. 10/10, Though I'd give it more if I could.

Until next time...

Meg

Author's Response: Meg,

Thank you so much! You mention so many points in this chapter.

Yes, I think for most people, there can be healing and recovery, especially when one allows other people in... to sort of fill the gaping holes left in the aftermath of loss.

Poor Rose... but yes, Blade will be that person for her. He really needs her as he deals with his grief as well.

I cannot think of a better name for Blaise's son. To me, it is what immediately comes to mind and certainly would fit his personality and Slytherin traits. Thanks for mentioning that you like it. :)

And your questions... well, I so very appreciate your comments in this area! So much so, that I went back through and added a bit of Rose's feelings on the subject of their parents getting together. I think it needed to be mentioned. So, thank you so much for 'suggesting' it! :)

As for Blade and Rose... GUILT would reign for a long while. I totally agree with his being torn and her feeling guilty as well. But I'd like to think that they would eventually find their way through it and have their happy, but bittersweet ending. I would've included it in the edit, but I couldn't seem to say what I wanted to say and still leave a highly emotional ending... in the rain. I suppose I just wanted to leave this open to readers at how they might've wanted it to go. You and I are definitely in agreement though... guilt for certain and in time, working through it.

They could have their own sequel, truly. But I'm just not up for the time commitment to continue.

Thanks so much for this review. It made my story better.

I also included a new section... Rose leaves a letter to Scorpius at his grave. I cried writing it. *tears*

Thanks again for every word!
Sincerely,
Dark Whisper


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