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Review:Vermouth says:
Thank you for finishing yet another wonderful story. I can't
say I took the time to read every single sentence, but I
enjoyed every one that I did read.

It appears that you got my PM! I rarely review on FF, but
since you post on that site first, I had to press for time to
get my suggestion through. I am overwhelmed that both of
my choices made it to your fictional christening. I remember
my mother asking me what I thought the baby would be,
and I (then four years old) said something to the effect of
"you already have a son, so a little sister would be nice".
Boy how wrong I was. Chapters like these really bring back
memories.

As you are might know, you are among a small group of
people who I send that translation to read; I don't know
what you think of the rendering (the story's not mine, after
all, I simply love it too much) but sometimes I feel so small
and unsure, especially seeing all the "tropes" you employ in
your fics which would mean that it would be increasingly
hard to "surprise" you with what happens to Severus or
Rebecca. Sigh... anyhow, I'm working on chapter eighteen
right now, would you like to see the newest updates?

As for sequels: I actually would very much like to see one to
one of your "older" series. Like the one where Alaina goes to
Hogwarts to teach Muggle Studies, or the one where little
Holly spends another winter at Hogwarts, chasing after snow
sprites (plus I'd really love to see how you would devise a
Severus/Narcissa romance); but most of all, I would really,
really want to see you start the sequal to "Worth
Saving". What really fascinates me is to see how a person
like Severus Snape would deal with an aborted romance,
and with a woman whose "crazy-about-you"-ness rivals that
of his pining for Lily in canon. It's okay if you don't feel like
going after that sequel and leaving other fics behind; right
now I would be immensely glad just to have a description of
a Thea McGonagall who's not shroulded in the mysteries of
Flashback. Surely that would come within the first three
chapters? Hope you'll give these ideas a thought or two.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

David

Author's Response: You're welcome, as always!

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