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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
You write hottie, I mean haughty Draco so well. XD
I just love his attitude. He does not like to be bossed around or put in situations that are dangerous and you give us this characterization spot on.

I LOVE your Pureblood rule about how she would not talk back or question him. Oh, my, that poses a problem, doesn't it?

And I loved how you made it a point that anyone with a Malfoy must look like a million galleons. So true in their formal world. I nodded my head in agreement while reading.

And I loved what he said about sleeping in the same room. "Abhorrent" is an excellent word for him to say. Not only is it his true feelings, but shows his smart vocabulary.

Great job, Meg. You have an excellent start as you move to this dinner party. Your last paragraph has me wondering what is going down. You have created a great pull to the next chapter.

Keep writing,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Hehe, there is something attractive about the slightly arrogant Draco, even if you still wish to hit him in the face. LOL.

I will be bringing up different rules throughout the chapters. I'm thinking oldschool way of thinking. Women are meant to be seen and not heard. Lol or is that children. Haha. In my mind it is the same for pureblooded women.

I have a thing for that word but I wanted to find a prefect place and that was it. I'm so glad you pointed it out!!

Thank you for reading and reviewing again. You are too kind and I look forward to your reviews.

Meg

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