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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Dang, I was half hoping that Matt would notice Lily sitting in the Rusty Bludger, too, and come over. But then again, he is really shy. Dang it to shy blokes who don't approach girls that like them because they're afraid of rejection! That's happened to me before in the past (mainly jr. high & high school... seemed to attract the shy guys more than the outgoing ones, which left me forever in the friend zone for the most part because they were too scared to make a move).

I'm happy for James. It's great that he's getting his life together. I wasn't sure what to expect when James showed up at Lily's with a request to be at dinner at their parents' to cushion the awkwardness so he could explain everything to their parents better without them blowing up. Awesome job writing James, by the way, which I mean as a complaint because anymore I find it difficult to find a James in a Next Gen fic that I don't like (which is sad because he used to be my favorite next gen character).

And eee! about the family tree you just posted because I see that Amy and Dillan had a daughter!!! I really want to see them make an appearance in this story, even if it is just a cameo appearance. (: Anyway, great chapter and if I remember correctly Matt and Lily are going have their first date in the next chapter...? :P Looking forward to reading more soon. (:

Author's Response: Yeah, it would be out of character for Matt to have approached Lily at the pub. Chances are he noticed her, but was too afraid to approach her. Lily is the outgoing one out of the two, so keep that in mind as you think about how the relationship will begin. ;)

I feel like so many people write James as out of control and not doing anything with his life and I can see why it's easy to go that route. But I didn't want to keep it that way forever because it just didn't sit right. I'm really glad you like the way I've written him!

Ahh, I know, I didn't mean to mention Amy & Dillan's daughter in the family tree because I hadn't mentioned her yet in the story. Oops! Oh, well. They will all be playing a larger role in the story as it progresses. You'll just have to wait and see about their first date! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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