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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
I kept thinking Taylor Swift's song 'We Are Never Ever Getting Back Together Again' every time Lily had to reiterate that she wasn't going to get back together with Sean. And I'm not really a fan of that song, either, because it's dubstep. But anyway, I liked this chapter even if nothing happened since we got to see more of other characters that play a role in Lily's life. I like how you've portrayed Bradley, he seems like a character with multiple layers (he works a lot, yet will deny that makes him anything like his workaholic father), his work ethic shows him as caring about finding answers for each of his clients. And Rose is just brilliant, and her character is definitely reminiscent of how you wrote her in BtS which character stability is always good with companion stories. Over all, awesome chapter, Sarah! (:

Author's Response: I love that song! I think of Lily every time I hear it and it's definitely been a vague inspiration to me during this story. I never thought of it as dubstep, though, because I don't like dubstep either.

I'm still in the introducing the characters phase. Most are characters I've used before, but a lot has changed. I'm really glad you like Bradley! He played a small role in BtS, so it was nice to bring him back. But Rose is my favorite of all the cousins! I love writing her. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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