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Review:MissMdsty says:
This was so intense! That is one of the most difficult things to do, give voice to the last moments of somebody's life.

Cedric was a boy when he died and his thoughts were those of a boy. Of his parents and the girl he loved, of how at seventeen he could reach eternal glory. His description in this story was very real, for the character Cedric Diggory and for a teenage boy that finds himself in over his head in something he never anticipated in his worst dreams.

All in all I think you did a really great job with this. Although if I remember correctly you had a few more stories, but I guess you deleted them. It's such a shame, I was really looking forward to reading your Fred/OC story.

Ral

Author's Response: Hello :)

Thanks for the lovely review!

I really felt for Cedric in the books, I really liked him and then it all came to a horrible end all too soon. I always wish JK had given him more time in the previous books as I would have loved to have known him more.

I'm really happy you thught my descriptions of his character were good, I must admit, it was a huge worry of mine when writing this.

I did delete them as they weren't great and I want to work on them when I have more time. I'm not very good at seeing a story through which is why the three things posted are all one-shots! I do intend to go back to it though, one day anyway.

Thanks again for the swap :)

Lauren


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