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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :) Laurenzo7321 here from the forums.

Okay, so I saw Lily and James and had to read this story. I can't help it, I can't pass up the chance to read some Lily and James goodness!

This was really cute! I loved how nervous James was to start with, and that he was glad Sirius wasn't around. I liked his reasons for his change in attitude too, it shows he really does mean it.

Lily was so funny when he was trying to convince her that he was head boy. Believing anything but James being selected for Head Boy. It was really cute to read.

But then James came through with his mature-ness and showed her the beginning of the man she could love. Again, it was really lovely to read!

This is a really great little one shot, the only thing I would say is that I would have loved to have read some more!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: I felt the same when reading your Jily Qudditch Story!

The thing with these two is that so much has been written about them, that it's easy to fall into a cliche, so I wanted it to be simple, no crazy!Lily and stalker!James, just two (almost) mature people discussing things over!

Thank you for the comment!


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