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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :) Laurenzo7321 here with your requested review.

I thought this was a really interesting and good start to your story. Isabella is certainly a strong character. I loved her sarcasm and the way she dealt with her lot, it certainly was fun to read. I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.

Well the Bollups are a nasty bunch aren't they? I can't believe she's hung around as long as she has! They almost make the Dursleys look nice. At least she's going to the Weasleys now though; we all know they don't mind taking anyone in.

I get that Isabella is a tough one and she's probably learnt to protect herself through going through so much with her foster homes. It would be nice though just to see it get to her a little bit though. She's been physically abused a couple of times with the sounds of it and she's obviously angry but I don't know. To see it get to her a little bit would have made it seem more realistic. Feel free to ignore me though if you disagree!

This was a really good read though, I enjoyed it :)

Lauren

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review! I love getting feedback, especially when I am given hints and ideas so this was very helpful.

I'm glad you seem to like Isabella's characterization and I definitely understand what you mean about it getting to her a little more-I am certainly not going to ignore you!

Thanks again!
Courtney:)

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