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Review:slayground says:
Hey there! Here from tag on the forums!

This is a really neat idea from the story. I usually hate reading AU's, mostly just because they confuse me, but I actually found this first chapter quite interesting and unique. It wasn't cheesy - sometimes your descriptions verge on being a little over-the-top, but that's rarely - it was written in a very unique style and it's an interesting plot line, so I'm quite excited to see where it leads!

There were a few grammar errors that I'm not going to bother pointing out to you - I'm sure other reviewers have ;)

Same with the Devlin seeming a bit old thing, as a mother myself I get really picky about that sort of stuff. It's the main reason I can't watch full house - children just aren't that articulate at that age. But I can understand it if he's got that whole special thing going on, so I'm interested to see where that goes.

To summarize, a nice job! I'm intrigued, and that's always a good thing.

xx Molly

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you weren't confused despite it being an AU and hope you go on to read some more! :D

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