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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
I have to admit that when you said 'ginger hair' I thought it could possibly a Snape/Lily but then again it might not be them. I'm not exactly a fan of Snape/Lily so I think I won't guess or try to put any names on the man and the woman. I'll just leave them unknown for now. (:

I thought you did a great job describing the man's pain, heartbreak and just overall misery. To me, it sounded like he was a bit regretful too or is that just me? I'm really interested on why their relationship fell apart and who he's blaming because I felt like he just didn't know who to blame. Did that even make sense? Probably not.

The repetition of 'we were just kids' was a really nice addition to the man's story. I felt like he was almost blaming the fact that they were just kids for their broken relationship.

Also, I love how you start of with their childhood and slowly develop their story and characters from there. I really liked the pace you had during the story, it wasn't too slow or too fast.

A really lovely, intriguing and interesting one-shot! I really liked it! ♥ Lovely job!

~Izzy

88th review out of 100

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