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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Giola,

Well, congratulations on this story being nominated for the "Ultimate Ship-off" competition on the forum. Your story was nominated by several and I thought I would check it out.

This was a really lovely read. I particularly enjoyed your characterization of Astoria and how she was more 'down-to-earth' so to speak than I expected. I could also relate to her well in being an author. You describe writer's block perfectly... don't we all hate it? It is so frustrating! :P

I loved the mirror's reflection sticking its tongue out and poking fun of her. And I love that his cold action in the beginning was described as getting a hug from him. LOL! I do love a quiet and haughty Draco.

I also loved his letter to her. And especially your description of it... how it was not perfect. It had words crossed out and was difficult for him to write. It was really a wonderful description that truly spoke volumes about his demeanor and feelings. Just beautiful, really.

I also loved how you described his coldness toward Pansy and how he did not show her any affection. I could really see it in my mind.

And I loved the Black's Manor and how it had a ballroom. I loved your description and how you brought it back into your story to tie it all together. She could see the ballroom dances of old in her mind... and so could I. I also thought it wonderfully poetic that Draco was a bit sad that society had changed to the point of not needing one. :(

Your story was really well written and had wonderful flow from one chapter to the next. She had great friends that cared for her. You had me wondering if Daphne might start seeing Brendan. She deserves him, I think.

Congratulations again on your multiple nominations.
I normally don't read much other than Dramione, but your Astoria reminded me of Hermione a bit... especially when it came to being around dusty books. :) You certainly had me rooting for her and was happy with her book success.

Thanks for the light-hearted, fun read.

Best Wishes my fellow Slytherin,
Dark Whisper

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