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Review:aquabluez17 says:
I loved how Dom is so different from all of the other stories I have read. She isn't a self conceited meanie.

I also lovehow she isn't popular and she has Locran as her friend and no one else. It adds to the whole thing of her being lonley.

One question? How come she doesn't remember Jasper if he is the keeper of Slytherin? Shes a chaser so when Ravenclaws vs Slytherin play then shouldn't she see him?

Great update otherwise!

Author's Response: Hello again, I've read a few stories on here and Dom always seems to be portrayed as self confident and outgoing but I never imagined her like that. I thought I'd give her my own twist. It's not that she doesn't get on with other people, its just Lorcan is one of the very few people she feels comfortable opening up to as she is quite shy, as later chapters will probably show.

Ah, well done for spotting that, it is explained short of right at the beginning of the next chapter, which incidently, is about half done.

Thank you so much for reviewing all the chapters and I really do hope to update soon, life has just been a bit of a pain lately so I'm really sorry. I haven't abandoned my stories though, don't worry!

InkAndParchment x


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