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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Whoa. Like... Yeah, whoa.

Okay, so, wow. I just loved the descriptions of each person, giving them their own little section, so the reader could focus on the awesomeness that is each of them, even Peter, who was one of them. It was just so sad and lovely and I want to smile because it's like having the best memories of them, then cry because they had to die for us to remember that best memories.

I spotted a couple of errors ("Hed spiral out of on control" having the 'on' there didn't sound right), but I didn't see anything big, so maybe just another read over. Over than that, I loved everything about this, even the unusual style, I don't think I've ever read anything like this. :)

Amazing job!

Sam.

Author's Response: Ahh that's exactly how I feel about you get these awesome memories of them but it's still so sad because they're all taken from us and gah :(

I'm so happy you like it, m'dear, and thank you so much for pointing out the error! It's been edited. This is what happens when I just post without letting my beta look over :P Typos galore!

I was so worried about the style, so I'm really thrilled that you liked it.



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