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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello! It's patronus_charm from the review tag!

I liked the idea of Harry being a seeker, as I always thought he would be a good one, and I almost want to go and see him play for England. I also liked how you provide a little background to the other characters so you knew where they were, and what they were doing.

I liked the banter between Draco and Hermione, as that was funny to read, and you could sense there was some chemistry between the two, especially with the French, given that's the language of love!

It was realistic, by the way you said that they forgave Draco, as it showed that there had been a transition, and that they hadn't just fallen in love, as that's quite unrealistic!

You have a tendency to give capital letters to things that don't need them, so rereading this story will eliminate them, as they're easy to spot:)

It was a nice little one-shot to read, you just need to sort out those capital letters really, Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hello again! I love your reviews so thanks a ton for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked the little background I provided on other characters, as it was important to me to show what they were all doing to allow the readers to accept Draco and Hermione. I always imagined Harry as a Seeker too, rather than an Auror (since he must have had enough of dark wizards for a lifetime) so glad you liked that!

I always struggle with banter, especially if I attempt to make them funny, so I appreciate that you found it realistic.

I didn't realize I did that! Thank you for pointing out to me about the capital letters. I wrote this one-shot a while ago when I was still working on my English so I guess that's why the mistakes. I'll edit asap!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

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