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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello again :)

This was another really great chapter to your story! You've not rushed anything and you've played the story out well for the reader. You descriptions throughout were excellent, particularly when she saw Hogwarts for the first time!

I still think Dumbledore and McGonagall were really mean to her, making her stand out in the crowd and pointing her out as the newbie, bless her! A Gryffindor though! I kind of felt sorry for her, been as she knew Luna but I'm looking forward to her meeting the Weasley twins for sure!

I like how you included snippits of other characters. You didn't name them but from your description it was quite clear who they were, Percy, Ron and Hermione.

So, I'm still left wondering what it is that has prompted Brienne's move from France to her father in England. Clearly something has happened with her mother and I look forward to you eventually revealing all!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hi! I'm really glad you liked it!

I guess she needed to be sorted somehow xD It would have been cliche to have it done specially private, if that makes sense.

All will be revealed soon, and more questions will be posed xD

Thank you very much for your review!

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