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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello my dear!

Gosh - what a great chapter. Draco Malfoy in this absolutely terrifies me! He's so dark and horrible!

I love how you have the competition building between Blaise and Draco. I really really want Blaise to win. He actually seems to care about her, Draco just wants her in a twisted kind of way. And Blaise is a rebel, I love how he walked out on Lucius' speech - go him!

Ooh, so we have more details on the Greengrass family business - not great is it? Her family does seem pretty messed up. Working for the order was a nice twist to it though, although I'm not sure how far the Order would trust them? Astoria's father seems pretty set on bringing the Malfoy's down though - gah you've built up so much tension and suspense, it's great to read!

Okay, the family secret is now driving me absolutely crazy! I really really want to know what it is! Please?

Surprisingly enough, I actually quite enjoyed Emily in this chapter. I wasn't a great fan of hers to start with but she grew on me a bit in this.

Well done on another awesome chapter. I will be back soon!


Author's Response: Hey!

Nice to see you back my dear and welcome to one of the angstiest stories I've ever written! Whoo! Hahahhhaha.
Draco Malfoy only gets creepier and creepier as you go on and he will continue to freak and gross you out. As a warning, you might not want to have anyone around when you're reading some of his future lines. ;D
Ooh, there's a bit of a competition going on with him and Blaise that just continues on from here. Draco wants Astoria in the way that say, a wolf might want a cute little bunny and Blaise is.Blaise, you can't really tell WHAT he's thinking.
But bravo for him, walking out on Lucius's disgusting speech! :D
No, the Greengrass family business is not great or pretty. Its actually quite dark. Poor Astoria. The mention of the Order I had to put in to throw you guys off but later on down the line, I think I probably should have added more information. :p
Astoria's father is a cruel man and he hates, hates, hates the Malfoy's and Blacks and anyone else pureblood and rich.
Hahha. You'll get your answers on the family secret by chapter five and six if you don't figure it out sooner for yourself. I hope it surprises you! :D
Emily might grow on you but she might not, I think Scorpius has more fans than she does. But then again, you may not like him towards the later chapters of this! ;)
Thanks for reading and I'll be looking forward to our next chat! :D
Much love,

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