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Review:adluvshp says:
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Ahaha this was a wonderful one-shot! I really enjoyed reading this, great job xD

I think you portrayed the chaos of the Weasleys quite well. Arthur and Molly were captured very well. I loved how you wrote Arthur trying to handle six children, it was hilarious! I did pity him though xP And then Molly coming in and putting everything in order was awesome, very Molly-like.

This was a fun read, and though there were some grammar errors, they didn't obstruct the flow much. I liked the ending also, it was quite sweet.

I think Weasleys are a very challenging family to portray, but you managed to show them just fine. It all felt very believable, and the situation didnt seem forced at all. The story had a humorous edge with its sweetness.

All in all, good work!

9/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review-I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, especially when I know how amazing your stuff all is!

The Weasley's definitely were a challenge to write, as there are just so many of them, but also very enjoyable.

Thanks again!
Courtney:)


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