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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
I think it's really cute so far!! And definitely funny, which makes it all the better. I like all the little romances and how all the characters are complex. I have mixed feelings about Fred. I like him a LOT, really, but I can't really get over the fact that he called her plain! Or basically boring! How awful is that? And if he really sees her that way, how can he like her? He just likes her potential? Or what? Maybe you can expand on that later on and show us what he likes about her? Maybe once they're together or almost together...
Another thing I wasn't sure about was the whole scavenger hunt groups business. Lee told Liv that someone specifically asked to be in her group. And that was obviously Fred, because George wouldn't do that. (Unless it was George doing it FOR Fred). And she remembered Lee saying that. She said Lee's words kept running through her head. So at this point...she does know that Fred likes her, right? And is it now just a question of how genuine he is and how she feels about him?
Because it still sort of seems like she's surprised at any clue that he may like her. But maybe that's just me.
I'm looking forward to seeing her and Sofia's plan out into action! Though I do kind of hope Liv plans something devious against Fred later on as well. A little payback for calling her plain. ;)
Update soon!

Author's Response: oh i will definitely expand! i do have alot of ideas for this fic and fred isn't that much of an idiot, i know some things he says are rude but it's all for the plot lol.
as for the group business, i think that in the teenage world it's all very confusing so she really doesn't understand what or how or why ANYTHING happens with fred when she's around him. she of course is still confused about him called her out on being a wet blanket so she questions that idea, maybe likes the idea of fred liking her, but she doesn't really understand it ;P

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