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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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Hmm, it seems like I have read and reviewed several of your stories now and I have to say, I am really enjoying the experience! You have a very sophisticated style of writing that is easy to read and hooks me in immediately.

You're right, we don't know much about Astoria from the books, though I guess I've always just assumed she was in Slytherin, so I found this chapter very interesting. I actually like that she was sorted into Hufflepuff-it also makes it sorta sweet that Draco ended up marrying a witch from Hufflepuff! And that's probably how I'm going to imagine it from now on!

I liked your characterization of Astoria is this chapter. She seemed pretty bold and fearless, while at the same time having a definite edge of innocence and sweetness about her. Your depiction of her has actually made me want to read more about Astoria, so nice work!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you like reading my stories and find my writing style "sophisticated" and "hooking". I am very flattered!

I wanted to give a different spin to Astoria, and so I put her in Hufflepuff, and I am glad you could accept it.

I put some thought into Astoria's characterisation so I appreciate the fact that you liked her depiction. There are some lovely stories on Astoria out there, and I hope you get a chance to read them =)

Thanks!


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